Tuesday, 19 June 2018




CLAWS
Adrenalin
Annabel Hustler

For this piece of writing we watched  a video and wrote about it.
My goal in this piece of writing was to keep the same tense and to use a variety of words.
It didn't take me to long to write it because I had so much to say.
Next time I will try to extend my sentences.
Also keep the same tense.
The video was about a hawk stalking a squirrel
I found trickey adding detail for my reader to put a picture in their head but i managed to do so.
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2 comments:

  1. Aleasha25 June 2018 at 10:29

    Mōrena Annabel, with your reflection you have given me a fantastic reflection and you have given my all the detail and I have a grate idea of what you are learning Matawai School.
    Why did you chose that specific writing topic? Ngā mihi.

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  2. Anonymous3 July 2018 at 11:47

    Kia ora Annabel,
    I like your piece of writing, It was descriptive and interesting.
    Keep up the good work!

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